a cry of lonelyness

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by season (the invisible soul) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 9:28:59

I looked up to the sky at nights.
Sunday, monday, tuesday and wednesday.
All I saw were only dark clouds,
No stars, no moon. so cold.
So was my heart
"Oh God, I feel so alone"
Thursday and friday,
The rain fell from the sky
Running down thru my face,
along with my tears.
"Oh God, this pains"
I looked up to the sky again on Saturday,
No more clouds, so clear
I smiled, no more tears
I found what I've been searching,
for all the days and night.
i wish you will know,
the thing that i want for days and nights.
but you seems don't understand,
how much i love and care for you.
will you understand,
my heart beat to you?
"Oh God, I just realized how much I love you"

Not

Post 2 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 13:17:10

That was beautiful Season! And I can totally relate to your situation. I feel that way a lot too. Great job. Smiles.

Post 3 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 13:19:30

Great job, girl. *Hugs.*

Post 4 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 13:32:13

season... All I can say is beautiful, Sis that ruled. *hugs*

Post 5 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 15:45:58

Hmm, Good one Sis.

Post 6 by season (the invisible soul) on Monday, 04-Jul-2005 2:52:38

glad you all like it. sorry, not a very good writing in terms of grammar and language usage. thanks alot for those who take some time to view on this topic.

Post 7 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Monday, 04-Jul-2005 16:46:07

Wow Season, I love that. Really great *big hugs*.

Post 8 by God's Child (Generic Zoner) on Monday, 04-Jul-2005 23:10:48

Very interesting season. i like it. Kind of relatible.
GC.